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good bye
Contributed by
jessies_property
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 03:17:07 PM in AEST
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today of all days
you came to me
told me a lie
you said that you cared
when i was afraid of losing you
you said it was just fantoms
tricking my mind
that i would never use you
but now i fear that i will lose you
for i fear i lose all great things
so i fear it is lost
all life is lost
all things are gone
so now i bid you
a fair well
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Re: good bye
(User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 03:21:03 PM AEST
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Dude,
that is so sad.
--Mothy |
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Re: good bye
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:33:34 AM AEST
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| good write. |
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