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Acceptance
Contributed by
Rhea
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 02:46:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Enter not into this world I call my own,
Your ruling for me may be overthrown.
Listen to me while I slander your name,
Regretting it later when my body you tame.
You think it's too early for your life to be taken,
But then you turn around and you're the foresaken.
You think you're too good for Him, you don't worship or pray,
Then all of a sudden...you won't be here....one day.
You'll be sorry when you're burning in hell just because you didn't care,
and when you're watching us live our happy lives, You'll wish you were there.
All Christ wants us to do is accept him into our hearts,
but we are so slefish to think it will tear our whole world apart.
Because isn't that what he did...by dying on the cross?
So that you can stand there sinning and your excuse is that you're lost.
Copyright ©
Rhea
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2004-10-08 14:46:30]
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Re: Acceptance
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by jessies_property on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 03:19:53 PM AEST
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| very good i liked it ^.^ mines suck tho watch every one will agree |
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Re: Acceptance
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by tormentedpixie on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 03:56:03 PM AEST
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| Very nicely done. i loved it! ^_^ |
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Re: Acceptance
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:35:32 AM AEST
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| excellent write. very powerful, but i felt there were a lot of assumptions in this to make it so. |
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