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Silent Confessions
Contributed by
eternallyloved
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 01:54:41 PM in AEST
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You lay there solemnly,
Peace Painted on your face.
Shadows dance down your body,
With my eyes upon you I trace.
Every curve of your being,
Each crevice more beautiful than the last.
Your smile flashes in my mind,
I sense myself falling fast.
I wish I could tell you how I feel,
The words just don’t seem to form.
I whisper as you lay there sleeping,
Suddenly I feel so warm.
They say that love takes time,
If nurtured the feelings grow.
But here I feel so overpowered,
The reason in my heart I know.
I just want to stare at you all night,
With each breath I’ll watch your chest.
Silently declaring how I feel,
Until the words form to reveal the rest.
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eternallyloved
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2004-10-08 13:54:41]
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Re: Silent Confessions
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by tormentedpixie on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:08:00 PM AEST
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| Very nicely written. Loved how it was composed and i could realy relate to it. Keep up the good work! ^_^ |
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Re: Silent Confessions
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by Solnubis on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:09:56 PM AEST
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| A very beautiful poem. |
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Re: Silent Confessions
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 05:25:17 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful. |
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Re: Silent Confessions
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:38:56 AM AEST
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| excellent write. very well written. =] |
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Re: Silent Confessions
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 03:01:17 PM AEST
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beautiful! very good poem. i love it. it has good forum and style.
i like the rhyming. it says alot, and is very expressive. kinda sad,
but a very nice poem!
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