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warning labels
Contributed by
Rxqueen
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 12:42:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I woke up that morning cold and in pain
You were next to me, so quiet
I wonder what do I honestly have to gain
Except my sanity bursting into riots
Now you say I am a freaking psycho
But then how can you still love me?
You tell all you friends I’ve got to go
But without my love where the heck would you be?
It is a sin that one day I’ll be there
I will prevail and raise up
But you, you shiver like a child
Covered in you own putrid throw up
You are a parasite leaching away my dignity
And you claim to be someone great
You try to say that for me you have pity
But in your eyes I see only hate
Poor Baby baby baby
Cry to daddy one more time
Call your attorney so he calls me
Loving you was my only crime
Sick and puny and calloused heart
Withered and melted and soiled
Wishing you could have enough power to part
From the girl who’s mind went spoiled
I am your body wrenching disease
I beat you down to pathetic tears
You cry out for my to STOP PLEASE
How could I do this after all these years
There are no warning labels on my face
Just a pretty and innocent smile
Sexy body dressed in flowers and lace
Makes your heart go into denial
How can a pretty little girl like me
Who everyone thinks is so darn sweet
Be so God forsaken crazy
But still sweep you off your feet?
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Rxqueen
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2004-10-08 12:42:19]
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Re: warning labels
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 01:19:25 PM AEST
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| So much anger. Great write. |
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Re: warning labels
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by Kie on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 01:48:30 PM AEST
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Angry and a tad disturbing. Phenomenal expression.
The relationship sounds very dysfunctional and unhealthy. But I sure liked the way you put it into a poem.
Kie |
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Re: warning labels
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:51:49 AM AEST
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| wow. very effective in conveying emotion. |
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Re: warning labels
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 02:57:10 AM AEST
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I felt this poem just as well as your other one. I love it and it brings out your emotion. Good job!!!
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