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Boy sitting at the window
Contributed by
Beni
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:42:59 AM in AEST
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Boy sitting at the window
He always sits at that window,
Looking out there as if he were trapped in a prison,
He has such lovely eyes,
Glistening as I look into them,
What I feel is true love,
If only I could say such feelings,
Such strong emotions I feel,
The thought of spending one day with him,
Makes me turn to jelly,
The thought of our first kiss,
That moment would stay in my heart for eternity,
However that everlasting moment will never come,
For he is still the boy sitting at the window.
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Beni
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2004-10-08 11:42:59]
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Re: Boy sitting at the window
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by shanarah on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 12:09:39 PM AEST
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this write is very eye-drawing and word catchy.
great job!
take care,
shanarah |
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Re: Boy sitting at the window
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by katyqueen35 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 01:19:52 PM AEST
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I have to say this write is kinda sweet.
well done. |
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