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beloved tears
Contributed by
clowns_can_burn
on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:19:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My love is broken by you and your selfish games
you ripped out my heart and shredded it
now i'm standing all alone, in the dark
As i watch my life drip away from my wrist i realized
what i once felt for you has decayed along with my soul, and all i can do is cry
cry for the life i wasted,for the life that i could have had, for the life that is dying
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Re: beloved tears
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by pixie on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:22:47 AM AEST
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a very powerful write,
pixie xx |
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Re: beloved tears
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by carmen_queasy on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 02:43:16 PM AEST
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| This is really intense. It's a good poem. :) |
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Re: beloved tears
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by shanarah on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 05:25:05 PM AEST
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Wow, very strong meaning. unique write.
I like it. take care,
shanarah... |
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Re: beloved tears
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by mylastwords on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:46:38 AM AEST
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beautful poem...i feel for you...i know what its like to be alone...if you need a friend, im here...i hope everything works out for you...
luv always xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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Re: beloved tears
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 02:13:33 PM AEST
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short and sweet. very beautiful. great write!
'As i watch my life drip away from my wrist'
love that line. very good poem!
¤~::.. a n d e ..::~¤ |
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