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My spirit Cries
Contributed by
shanarah
on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:42:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Clouds hover the moon
in the endless sky
longing to be free
my spirit will cry
raindrops shine and
flash by light
casting my mind
of this ghastly fight
situations, hard to cope
broad horizons, please show
me hope
temptation stays quiet
on this peaceful night
mad as hell
I know this isnt right
believe in ourselves
positive becomes true
life will have more meaning
for me and you
Copyright ©
shanarah
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2004-10-08 09:42:13]
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Re: My spirit Cries
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by pixie on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:47:05 AM AEST
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yes telling yourself to stay positive is the best thing you can do, I need to do that more often lol, a great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: My spirit Cries
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 12:48:00 PM AEST
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The concept is great. The ability to achieve it is very hard sometimes. Great write.
Rita |
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Re: My spirit Cries
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 05:29:21 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I can relate. I have been working on staying positive... |
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Re: My spirit Cries
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:02:53 PM AEST
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I understand your feelings very well...staying positive is a difficult thing to do. Believe me, the sun will break through the clouds sooner or later.
Beautifully written, wonderfully expressed poem. I'm glad you decided to share this.
Shivering in the rain,
-V.S. |
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Re: My spirit Cries
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by tony3_000 on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 08:49:24 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written and I like the images that you've created. The ending is true so don't let rough times get you down. |
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Re: My spirit Cries
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:20:03 AM AEST
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keep the faith.
Great writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: My spirit Cries
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by Archie on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:28:30 PM AEST
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| Sometimes we need reminders to not get sucked into the pit of dispair. This is a great one. Thanks |
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