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MENTAL MADNESS
Contributed by
thepoet
on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:12:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Mental madness social disgrace.
Gutter rats of the human race.
Help me get out of this place.
A murder weapon that can't be traced.
Ice pick made of ice melted today.
Aquit this man the jurors say.
Ice cream truck comes by today.
No popcicles says the man today/
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Re: MENTAL MADNESS
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hurretje on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:21:00 AM AEST (User
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Wonderful description of the madness and insanity of modern times...
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: MENTAL MADNESS
(User Rating: 1 ) by shanarah on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:48:10 AM AEST (User
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great choice of words for insanity today.
take care,
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Re: MENTAL MADNESS
(User Rating: 1 ) by Quilted_rag_doll on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:29:49 PM AEST (User
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very good. i like the style of writing and rhyming. not a long poem, but meanfull. a good describtion of the insanity in todays world. good work.
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Re: MENTAL MADNESS
(User Rating: 1 ) by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:21:53 AM AEST (User
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Very good... i liked it alot...great work
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears
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