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The nightingale
Contributed by
Hurretje
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 07:59:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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When the nights puts gloom upon this land
And when dreams and memories begin to blend
Then I listen to the nightingale
When oblivion begins to last
And I get rid slowly of the past
Then I listen to the nightingale
So many folks enjoy its song
Its velvet tunes can do no wrong
When I listen to the nightingale
How I know it has been years
Since its sweet song touched your ears
As the Moon shone on your face
I was locked in your embrace
Soft and sweet, its lullaby
It's unseen by the sleeper's eye
As it wakes my smothered dreams,
Gives way to my buried screams
Then the night breathes in and hears
The magic reflections of my tears
When I listen to the nightingale
Then the East preaches orange red
And I can finally forget
That I listened to the nightingale
Copyright ©
Hurretje
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2004-10-08 07:59:52]
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Re: The nightingale
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 08:10:06 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written, and with such true feeling, cool blend of rythem style lyrics, poem. |
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Re: The nightingale
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by Kie on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 08:31:42 AM AEST
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This was very pretty, soothing and colorful.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Kie |
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Re: The nightingale
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by arden on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:09:18 AM AEST
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just reading this made me calm.
its so smooth, and im not just talking about the rhyme sham. the feel and feelings that it invokes are powerful ones.
this was truely a piece of art. beautiful write.
loved it.
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Re: The nightingale
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by thumper on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:19:22 AM AEST
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This was very meloncholy. I thought it was about the soothing sounds of the nightengale, but it was deeper than that. Therapy is therapy, whether we ask for it or not. ;o) Very succinct. Kudos!
Friend,
Thumps ; o) |
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Re: The nightingale
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by Stitch on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:28:52 AM AEST
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Isn't it strange how the smallest thing---a smell, a bird's song, a color---can plunge you back into feelings that were buried and forgotten? Bring them to life again as if they have never died? You have explored that phenomenon with color here. Very nice.
Stitch |
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Re: The nightingale
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by pixie on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:48:22 AM AEST
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wow, very good and very relaxing and peaceful,
pixie xx |
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Re: The nightingale
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 12:48:45 PM AEST
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| Oh Hur, this was such a wonderful piece of poetry. Well done my friend. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: The nightingale
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 01:27:27 PM AEST
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I think it was the american indians who said "God is nature" how right they were.
Beautiful.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: The nightingale
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 01:39:10 PM AEST
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Beautiful music to the soul.
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: The nightingale
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by inoc on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:43:26 PM AEST
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what a nightingale can do...
it works wonders
I enjoyed your poem so much
thankyou
cheers!~ |
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Re: The nightingale
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 06:26:49 PM AEST
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I much enjoy the poetic metaphors you employ.
Then the East preaches orange red
Excellent wording, I think. And the tone of this is very enjoyable. Something not quite, completely, of this world (or not as we tend to see it). Perhaps there's a touch of Elvendom about it.
Now I'm philosophizing...
Well done!
Andrew |
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Re: The nightingale
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 02:16:30 PM AEST
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truely flowingly beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The nightingale
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by graci on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 05:20:44 AM AEST
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hi.
i was wondering if you're familiar with the story of the nightingale who killed himself so that his bestfriend can have a red rose...(not sure on species)
simply amazing
love your poem...
it went straight to my soul |
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Re: The nightingale
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by Archie on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 05:32:37 PM AEST
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| This poem is amazing. You have a very elegant writing style that is fun to read and meaningful. |
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