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Holy Hand Mapped a Maze
Contributed by
row
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 07:22:04 AM in AEST
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oops
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A world captured by my skull
Need some air, but who will ever care?
Left that world, feet rose off mind's grounds
But you'll never belieive half of what i found
They give it a name
Just like it's the same
Complexities wonder
This was no blunder
Holy Hand, mapped a maze
Formed with no scratch, with no graze
Windows into my mind
You won over those with which I gaze
Copyright ©
row
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2004-10-08 07:22:04] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Holy Hand Mapped a Maze
(User Rating: 1 ) by Aquaelius on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 07:24:08 AM AEST (User
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Good poem. Thank you for sharing |
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Re: Holy Hand Mapped a Maze
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 12:57:14 PM AEST (User
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Your title just drew my attention.
A very deep and enjoyable poem.
Kie |
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Re: Holy Hand Mapped a Maze
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:54:31 PM AEST (User
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philsophical to a degree, but above and beneath burns even more chilling thoughts... i'll take to mind your thoughts and smile. that'll be good.
-smelly_man! |
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