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28 jun 04
Contributed by
liquor_lunchbox
on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 06:32:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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listen to the engine roar
while you jump out the door
feel your heart pound so fast
as you make this second last
look upon the fear so loud
while you stand tall and proud
never back away from fate
it's what makes you never late
strike with anger to dafeat your foes
'cause being a warrior is the life you chose
Copyright ©
liquor_lunchbox
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2004-10-08 06:32:47]
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Re: 28 jun 04
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by Remy on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:52:59 PM AEST
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dafeat my foes? hope to... keen writing, simple yet fairly deep. i like this concept. good write.
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Re: 28 jun 04
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 06:06:53 PM AEST
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| Something about the last line smacks of sarcasm. I dont know if it was intended but if so i liked it. |
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Re: 28 jun 04
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by KarlaMarie on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 07:52:05 PM AEST
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I liked it, the first thing in my head was cool.
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