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That I Should Die - revised
Contributed by
MomentInTime
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Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 01:27:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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God said to Jesus,
“Stand up my son, you’re now a man.
These doubts you’re having,
I’ll try to clear as best I can.
Though if you heed me, this much is true:
you will be crucified
it makes so little difference what I do.”
Well now young Jesus
said “Dad you know what’s going down.
People aren’t friendly
and those who fear have left this town;
still we continue, full steam ahead,
so please do tell me father:
can I still come see you when I’m dead.”
- chorus I -
"I’m not that happy that I should die
when I’m not even sure I know the reason why;
to sacrifice me, what will it serve?
Is it to save their some souls
when that is really
more than they deserve. "
God didn’t argue,
God knows at times faith can be weak.
As re-inforcement
to Jesus God these words did speak:
“Paths there are many, most lead astray,
look well inside your heart
and maybe you will learn there is a way.”
-chorus II -
"I’m not that happy that you’re to die
when I’m the only one who knows the reason why;
to sacrifice you, it breaks my heart,
though it will save your soul
and you and me
will never be apart."
PS. I intend recording this on the weekend and posting it on my web page.
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Re: That I Should Die - revised
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 02:14:07 AM AEST
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| YEAH! This lyrics kick major butt! |
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Re: That I Should Die - revised
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by Flipped_out on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 03:29:07 AM AEST
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So lovely Jordan...and from the heart..PM me when you have this on your site please
una canzone bella da un uomo bello grazie il mio amico
Kelly xxx |
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Re: That I Should Die - revised
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 10:55:48 AM AEST
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Very cool Jorden,
Looking forward to hearing it. |
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Re: That I Should Die - revised
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by Remy on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 07:50:01 PM AEST
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curious... i might take some interest in hearing this. not a bad write either!
-smelly_man! |
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Re: That I Should Die - revised
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:53:00 AM AEST
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| A beautiful well-written song lyric. Hallelujah! |
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Re: That I Should Die - revised
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 03:46:15 PM AEST
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I like this one.
And you are right, we didn't deserve it. |
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