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Much Like Death
Contributed by
spaceotter
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Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It happened tonight-
Much different than I thought it'd be.
"Together 'till death"-
And you just died to me.
This world seems much grayer-
No sun do I see-
It's much like death-
You leaving me.
It came from behind-
Cloaked in compassion and help.
"Together 'till death"-
And you just died to me.
This knife in my back-
Keeps the blood from flowing free.
It's much like death-
You leaving me.
I thought it wouldn't happen-
No way there, I could see.
"Together 'till death"-
And you just died to me.
This things much like death,
You leaving me.
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spaceotter
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2002-11-14 05:30:00]
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Re: Much Like Death
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 05:56:39 AM AEST
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| hope things work out for you, maybe she needs some time, wonderful write though |
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Re: Much Like Death
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 06:09:00 AM AEST
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| Wow how very sad,I hope she will come around! good luck with it! Christina |
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Re: Much Like Death
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by OreO on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 06:15:53 AM AEST
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Wow Adam i hope everything is ok
If you need to talk im a good listener
this made me cry, it's so sad
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Much Like Death
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 07:12:48 AM AEST
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| How very sad - I hope you can work it out. I love this poem, especially the lines "Together till death" and you just died to me". |
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Re: Much Like Death
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by Hollie85 on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 07:20:30 AM AEST
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| A topic very close to the heart but a beautiful poem. Great write. |
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Re: Much Like Death
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 08:26:06 AM AEST
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Tho it is very sad, it is a very well written poem.... Hope it's fictional...and if it isn't, then I hope things work out for you both..
Jenni |
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Re: Much Like Death
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by Elisabeth on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 01:55:59 PM AEST
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| Very sad, and close to home for me. This was very well written. Enjoyed reading. |
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Re: Much Like Death
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by juliette on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 03:49:04 PM AEST
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| A very touching read and I am so sorry for your hardship - Funny how beautiful words just roll from hearts broken...... |
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Re: Much Like Death
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by Apartment213 on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 02:28:27 AM AEST
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| woa, well great poem not so great news keep writing |
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