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Why?
Contributed by
HellsLibrarian
on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:12:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Why?
Why have I been cast aside?
discarded, all used up
worthless
Oh, it wasn't fair to me, you say?
Well, I should be the judge of that.
Oh, you want your t-shirt back, you say?
Shall I wash the tearstains from it?
Oh, It isn't you, it's me, you say,
Well, it doesn't feel that way.
farewell- first love, first loss
first to make me cry
farewell
romantic, childish dreams
broken under a load we couldn't bear
I miss you.
farewell.
Why?
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Re: Why?
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:20:28 PM AEST
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| I am sure it hurts but anotherwill come, be strong be patient and love will come your way again. very well expressed |
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Re: Why?
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by thumper on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 11:09:37 PM AEST
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Awww, don't fret. There are more than one fish in the sea! You expressed this very well. I remember one guy I broke up with that I kept his shirt, it smelled of his aftershave. I walked around holding that shirt tight and smelling it constantly!! I know, I'm a doof. Oh well. This write reminded me of that. Very expressive! I feel your pain in this. And confusion. Loved it! Peace to ya.
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: Why?
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by eatfresh22 on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 11:49:47 PM AEST
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Sad....first love....broken heart. I won't say it shouldn't hurt, because I'm sure it does. But, tears will end, childish dreams will fade, then romance will blossom in your mature, healed heart. Coping is tough, as you have shown.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Why?
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by lovesucks on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:41:41 AM AEST
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| I loved this |
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