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YELL FOR HELP
Contributed by
goofyone
on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 09:18:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I yell for help but no one is there to hear it
But the darkness won't let go of its hold on me
and I slowly begin to give in to the pain
I know that this path doesn't lead to happiness
but why doesn't someone grab my hand
I give in to the thing that holds me
all of the strength and all of the courage
that I once held in my heart
Slowly slip below the world of conscientiousness
undetected by the people that I love
I don't want to fight anymore
The pain and hurt has won
I've given into the darkness
‘’GOD’’ please take me home
goofyone
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2004-10-07 21:18:00]
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Re: YELL FOR HELP
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by Soulless on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 09:49:35 PM AEST
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Your not alone. Just give it time, someone will find your hand and take hold. Just keep writing your emotions. Your poetry is so cherished and i felt this piece was simply beautiful.
Kisses,
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Re: YELL FOR HELP
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by RoxyGirl on
Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 01:22:11 AM AEST
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I know how you feel but just hold on you cant let it win. I know you are strong you can fight the pain and yes god will always be there no matter what.And you can find your home because your home is where you were last happy.
LOVE ALWAYS YOUR FRIEND
ROXYGIRL
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