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What Happens When We Die?
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:39:06 PM in AEST
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What actually happens when we die?
I believe that we become angles in the sky,
Sit upon clouds looking down on loved ones,
Watching them in the light of the summer sun.
We watch over them when they go to sleep,
Hold their shaking hands when they weep,
But they do not feel us in our angelic form,
All they can feel is a presence that’s so warm.
We long to hold onto the ones that we love,
Float into them like a mist from above,
Tell them that everything will be alright,
Whisper sweet nothings into their ear late at night.
Their tears fall as they miss us so much,
We suffer pain as they can not feel our touch,
At night they hold onto their pillows wishing,
That it was us they were hugging & kissing.
Love doesn’t suffer any sort of death,
It lives inside our soul as we take our last breath,
Heart has stopped but true love carries on,
Forever in lovers tears or laughter it sings a song.
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Re: What Happens When We Die?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:55:48 PM AEST
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This is cool. I like your concept. It is pretty close to the picture I have in my mind. Great delivery here, Krissy.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: What Happens When We Die?
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 07:09:48 PM AEST
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Heavenly beautifull write.
luv, huggs, smiles, angels,
emy |
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Re: What Happens When We Die?
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by Yousef on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 07:17:21 PM AEST
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| What you think will happen after we die is totally different from what I think will happen then, I think we all are going to be judged for what we did while we were alive, and all the things we did will be put on a balance if the good exceeded the bad then we go to heaven and if the bad ecxeeded the good then we go to hell, and wherever we go either Heaven or Hell we stay there as a punishment or a reward for what we did when we were alive. |
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Re: What Happens When We Die?
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 08:30:27 PM AEST
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I loved this Pix! It was beautifully portrayed.
The last stanza is my
favourite. I agree completely!!
(Huggles)
~Breezy |
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Re: What Happens When We Die?
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by Dorian on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 09:54:05 PM AEST
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Beautiful pixie, i simply enjoyed reading it, and
reading it and reading it, i think u get the point . . .
Dorian : )
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Re: What Happens When We Die?
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:26:01 PM AEST
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| you have outdone yourself here. great write |
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Re: What Happens When We Die?
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by shanarah on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 02:57:04 AM AEST
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very soft and beautiful write
take care,
shanarah... |
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Re: What Happens When We Die?
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 09:51:06 AM AEST
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This is so sweet, so gentle, so hopeful, it brought a big lump in my throat. Girl, you know how to move people. A truly wonderful write.
Big hugs,
Hur |
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Re: What Happens When We Die?
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by Archie on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:45:58 PM AEST
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| I like this piece although I have a very different view of what happens I take an affinity to this because there are loved one who have impacted my life so much that a part of them stays with me. |
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