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Untitled
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 05:06:45 PM in AEST
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Truly
When feelings mean nothing
And love is victorious
Tears drying up like roses in winter
Beauty dies
While death rains
What a cliche
Petals drifting and falling
Like yesterdays tears
Crying away pinpricks
And laughing away the deepest lacerations
Drive a nail through life
And I'll laugh in your face
Because emotion is dead
I feel like the first time
That I spontaeneously combusted
My heart caught fire
And I hung it out to dry
Tripped over nothing
Scratch my elbows on the sidewalk
They never healed
And the sidewalk still bleeds
Copyright ©
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2004-10-07 17:06:45]
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Re: Untitled
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:27:34 PM AEST
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| i think only the ending was weird. =] the beginning was excellent. the ending was interesting. keep up the excellent writes =] |
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Re: Untitled
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 03:04:19 AM AEST
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| i must be a cool person, i love it and i wanna comment! i love this style of poetry, if it is a style, and hope 2 c more from u! |
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Re: Untitled
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:56:36 PM AEST
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| mason do you drop acid? what the hell was that?!?!?!? it was freakin' awesome, your talent always shines thru, but come on. this was hella weird, i loved it!!! |
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