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Awake With You
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 05:01:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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As sunlight spreads
Its golden fingers
To gently pull open
Your sleeping eyelids
I lay next to you
And watch, anticipating
Your beautiful eyes
Staring into mine
Then your eyes do open
And they are more beautiful
Than memory can recall to me
My heart melts
And is infused with yours
You whisper, "Good morning"
And smile
Oh, such beauty in that smile
While stray strands of hair
Cascade around your beautiful face
Glinting in the sunlight
Wrap me in your warm embrace
"I love you" is whispered in my ear
And back in yours
Copyright ©
eyesxcriedxout1989
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2004-10-07 17:01:13]
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Re: Awake With You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:10:04 PM AEST
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| sounds like an awesome dream.. |
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Re: Awake With You
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 05:53:31 PM AEST
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| starchild is a homo. this was an awesome POEM, derived from a dream. mason, this is excellent. you always know just how to keep your stuff interesting. granted it's usually about love, whereas mine is usually about depression. this was very, very good. |
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Re: Awake With You
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by theMoth on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 03:46:12 PM AEST
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Very sincere.
Great opening
lines.
You have good taste in
words.
--Mothy |
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