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Majestic Dolphin
Contributed by
shanarah
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Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 04:59:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Under desolate skies,
mercy pours into my heart
as sea-winds scream,
choked with hate
by its unaging intellect,
no breaths had been drawn
in time I spent with his voice,
among the deepening shades
lured by a softening eye,
silver-toned and silky,
gliding, magnificently,
this majestic mammal carries
no shame
Dolphin;
pushing beyond endurance
with endless devotion,
recovers the volcanic response
of the crying seas
Copyright ©
shanarah
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2004-10-07 16:59:21]
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Re: Majestic Dolphin
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by pixie on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 05:06:07 PM AEST
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awww a lovely write, I love dolphins,
pixie xx |
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Re: Majestic Dolphin
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 05:17:29 PM AEST
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Oh Lori, this was absolutely beautiful, in all it's content!!!! Creatures with so much intellect, and perservance, and love by you I can tell...........Marvelously written with words so eloquently said!
Thanking you so much for you lovely comment on my Autumn Poem..........and please let me WELCOME YOU TO YPDC....Welcome aboard, we are so happy to have you here with your lovely poetry. You will add much to our loving family!
Loved your poem.........I adore critters of all kinds.
LovingCritters
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Re: Majestic Dolphin
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:30:32 PM AEST
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| good write =] |
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Re: Majestic Dolphin
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:21:16 PM AEST
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Amazing write about the most beautiful creatures on earth....... Great imagery...
Welcome to YPDC... I am sure that I will enjoy every one of your poems....
Jenni |
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Re: Majestic Dolphin
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:22:04 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write as the dophins are beautifull.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Majestic Dolphin
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by Archie on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 05:34:05 AM AEST
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| You chose an imagery that I did not expect for such a beatiful animal. Great write. |
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