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The END of TIME
Contributed by
Irish
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Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 04:18:02 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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As humans, we walk in a maze called TIME,
We follow the only light we see,
A pixie called FATE,
We follow her wherever she leads us,
DEATH being only a few strides behind.
FATE ultimately leads us to a dead end,
This is where DEATH ends our torment of wandering,
When DEATH takes us to a better place.
The END of TIME.
Copyright ©
Irish
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2004-10-07 16:18:02]
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Re: The END of TIME
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by eatfresh22 on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 04:23:27 PM AEST
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Hmmm...inspirational....I guess so. Inspiring to those who believe in life after death (as I do), but it seemed a little pessimistic in its view on this life we behold on earth. I always thought to make best of these days instead of dwelling on death. It almost seems like escaping reality, but who could blame you for doing that in this wretched place we live? Good thoughts; I've had the same.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: The END of TIME
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by tormentedpixie on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 04:28:06 PM AEST
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Hy! Nice work! Told you before now that I like this one. But now I'll say it again for others to see. He's a great writer ppl!!!
Anyway, this is really a cool poem. Pixie...hey, Im a pixie...not called Fate...but ah well. Love it! Keep it up! ^_^ |
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Re: The END of TIME
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:43:01 PM AEST
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| excellent write. i cant say i cared for the capitalization though. |
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