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You know...
Contributed by
tormentedpixie
on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 04:17:07 PM in AEST
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You know how I am feeling,
no matter what I say.
You know my deepest secrets,
my fears.
You know how to make me smile,
make me laugh.
You know just what to say,
when I'm upset.
You know what I am thinking,
before I even say it.
You know so much about me,
as I do you.
I know your reaction,
to the things I tell you.
I know when you have to go,
before you say goodbye.
I know what you find funny,
and what annoys you.
I know your private info,
that you've told no other.
We know each other so well,
yet we're so far apart.
We're so in touch with one another,
though separated by miles.
Does distance make the heart grow fonder?
Really, does it?
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2004-10-07 16:17:07]
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Re: You know...
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by pixie on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 05:11:02 PM AEST
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well they say absense makes the heart grow fonder, it does ring true for me, althought it hurts when we are apart also, a good write
pixie xx |
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Re: You know...
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:46:16 PM AEST
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| i think it kills the heart faster. well i cant say i really cared for this piece because of the redundance of words, but other than that it was an excellent write. |
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Re: You know...
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by hoist1atca on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 11:47:09 PM AEST
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Well written poem-
You also poasted SHATERED today-
Are theesee maybe linked together?
Distance nor time can ever undo true lovee. |
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