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Winter
Contributed by
hooray_its_jen
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Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 03:34:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Each leaf has fallen to the frosted ground
And songbirds now no longer perch to sing.
Those rusty colors are no longer found
And winter takes its place before the spring.
Each day the light will quickly come to end
When gusty winds will take their deadly toll.
You know the winter weather's not your friend
When clouds of smoke from chimneys always roll.
The pond is frozen solid 'neath your feet,
Your nose becomes all numb out in the cold.
The warmer weather now admits defeat
And fall's sweet stories are no longer told.
As grass is covered with a sheet of snow
The winds of winter never cease to blow.
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2004-10-07 15:34:07]
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Re: Winter
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by eatfresh22 on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 04:18:29 PM AEST
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I liked this. Sonnets always have nice rhythyms, and yours was not exception. And I do so love nature.
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Re: Winter
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:48:25 PM AEST
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| very nice sonnet. =] |
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Re: Winter
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 07:10:29 PM AEST
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This is so pretty, Jenn. I just prefer fall to stay a qhile. It is my favorite time of the year.
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Rita |
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Re: Winter
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:01:05 PM AEST
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Very nice write.
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