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A Bleeding Tear
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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How in fact, can I move on, when all I see are rains,
where in life, do I go, when inside I see the pains,
a sundrop left the place I live, a tear of blood I shed,
I wanted more in life for you, and now you wind up dead,
Heavens tear, upon my soul, the shades of love I see,
beneath the layers of my skin, a tear of blood I bleed,
Not long ago, my world shined, those little things in life,
the tears of blood I bleed today, my baby, it isn't right,
when you were young I'd hold you close, and teach you what I knew,
now I have these tears of blood, bleeding out to you,
I listen to the season sounds, and echoes of the past,
if, oh if, the colors were, a dream that would now last,
Heavens tear, placed inside .... my heart, Oh how it bleeds,
babe today, I thought of you, a love of certainty,
Still ..... I stand, beneath the sun, a tune I often feel,
how in fact, two lives are gone, is this now for real,
Today I stand alone, my sundrops now are gone,
heaven tear upon my soul, bleeding like a song,
Carry me back, to hear your voice, and see your smiling face,
too many days a tear I cry, I question time and place,
colored time in the sun, if only days would stay,
blessed with life I must move on, though my life is shaded gray,
if only, oh if only, your days were twice to be, here in time I question not, the tears of blood I bleed,
I stand alone, as season's pass, and tears soil my skin,
here I stand alone and empty, a bleeding tear I've been,
Two many times I often think, of where in time you'd be,
then as my heart starts question, another tear I see,
How in fact can I move on, when all I see are rains,
where in life do I go, when inside I bleed with pain!
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I miss and love you both, ' why ' within a day apart I will never know,
Copyright ©
Valerie_Pearson
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2002-11-14 03:00:00]
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Re: A Bleeding Tear
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 03:04:05 AM AEST
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| OMG Val,how truley sad to have lost so much in such a short time! How do you go on after that? Beautiful poem! God bless! Christina |
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Re: A Bleeding Tear
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 05:23:03 AM AEST
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This poem just pulls at my heart strings..I'm very sorry for your loss.. I know it can't be easy to go on..but you're strong.... hold on to the memories...
Luv and hugs,
Jenni |
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Re: A Bleeding Tear
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by OreO on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 06:45:29 AM AEST
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This made me cry, it's so
heart touching and so deep
Thank you for sharing this one
I really enjoyed this alot
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: A Bleeding Tear
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 07:21:30 AM AEST
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Some people in life are just dealt too much pain to contend with - it seems so unfair. After reading a lot of your poems I realised last night that you not only lost your daughter, your father, you have an autistic son, your cousin was murdered, and you worked in a drug rehab centre where you saw a lot of pain. I believe you must be a very special person to be dealt so much. It makes one realise how small our own problems really are.
Wonderful poem. |
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Re: A Bleeding Tear
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 06:33:33 PM AEST
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| ohhh valerie, this has brought me to my deepest tears right along with you my friend, my face is wet, many of mine are gone too, i try to think that they are roses that bloom on the other side... 'a candle that shines twice as bright; shines half as long', for truely our lost loves were.... there is nothing we can do but keep them alive in our hearts until we are on rainbows too, much much love and a big hugg, ever nessa x |
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Re: A Bleeding Tear
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 03:32:57 PM AEST
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| i think how its unique how ive used this metaphor idea as you did and i come and pick a poem out of the blue and see this... The thought of bleedin a tear stresses the hurt and pain in cryint for something so dear... i see eye to eye with what you wrote and think its great... im an aspiring singer song writer and ideas like these are what help get through the norm of bein original not many writers i know use that expression 'tears of blood' but i think it pushes the idea through great work |
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Re: A Bleeding Tear
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 6th January 2004 @ 01:08:18 AM AEST
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| I lost a baby when he was eight days old..I woke up from medication given me for an on-going seizure and my husband was standing over our bed holding our dead infant son...his weeping is what had awakend me. For years I drew eyes with hearts instead of pupils, and tears coming from inside the hearts. The pain of losing a child cannot be understood by anyone who doesn't experience it. Your poem touched my heart, and grabbed at my soul. Thank you for sharing your pain. I know it is difficult. My loss was 34 years ago but the mourning never ends.... |
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Re: A Bleeding Tear
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by britanna_rose on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 12:25:50 AM AEST
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| i love this poem...it gave me chills it was so good...im very sorry for ur loss...keep up the good writing |
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