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Scars
Contributed by
brokensoul
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Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 02:19:17 PM in AEST
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Each scar has a story,
a story of pain,
story of fear,
of desperation,
confusion.
Each scar is shown physically,
each scar is symbollic,
how emotion felt,
visible form,
hideous.
Each scar shares pathetic memories,
sharing my inermost thoughts,
whithout saying anything,
just showing,
scars.
Each scar frightens those close,
sometimes pushing them away,
leaving me alone,
in darkness,
crying.
Copyright ©
brokensoul
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2004-10-07 14:19:17]
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Re: Scars
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by theMoth on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 02:43:44 PM AEST
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I liked it.
Very effective.
I'm impressed with
how you maintained
the form and how well
it works for what you're saying.
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Re: Scars
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:12:07 PM AEST
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| truly awesome |
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Re: Scars
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:06:04 PM AEST
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| very nice. |
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Re: Scars
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:32:41 PM AEST
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Awesome write.......loved this...
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Re: Scars
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 04:53:15 PM AEST
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Such a true poem... what really stuck out to
me was how this was written. 5 words in the
first line and then going down from there that
was great. I can relate to this a lot I'm glad I
found it.
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Re: Scars
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by Hoots on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 05:03:37 PM AEST
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Wow...that was so deep. I understand where you are coming from...my scars also scare lots of people...they come up with the conclusion that I'm a morbid mental case. Oh well...I guess I am. But keep writing poetry about this topic...it'll come so naturally. I'm looking forward to reading some more of your work. Keep up the good work.
Krystle |
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