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Untitled Emotion
Contributed by
TrinitysMassacre
on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:12:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Lying here scarred and broken,
My dying heart has not yet spoken,
Breaking down and far from truth,
Feeling old yet still in youth.
Torment and suffering, eyes so full of strain,
Intoxicating eyes reflect the blossoming pain,
Barely grasping this last breath,
As I slowly fall into the hands of death.
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TrinitysMassacre
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2004-10-07 10:12:22]
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Re: Untitled Emotion
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 12:30:57 PM AEST
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oooo...i likes it very much! its not very short, but has much meaning. good use of words and rhyming. great work!
¤~::.. a n d e ..::~¤ |
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Re: Untitled Emotion
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 10:16:41 PM AEST
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lol...::hits head:: what i meant was
its not very long!
sorry 'bout that lil typo there...^_^ |
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