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What Was That Thing?
Contributed by
inoc
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Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 08:38:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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asleep in the beach shack
in a room on my own
I feel a presence
I am not alone
through a window
it apears
I try to get up
but I can't I'm in tears
my mind and my body
is under a force
trying to rise
It's like a curse
I mumble help, help
no one hears
as I fight
this thing goes inside
my mouth that night
I gag and I shake
it goes down my throat
my stomach rises
suddenly I float
I am now asleep
it feels like forever
when I finally rise
I know this happened but my friends day never!
The owners of the shack also had experiences simular to the above but still...it leaves you wondering...what was that thing?
Copyright ©
inoc
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2004-10-07 08:38:03]
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Re: What Was That Thing?
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by Archie on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 09:27:23 AM AEST
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| That was a little unsettling. Good write. |
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Re: What Was That Thing?
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by Remy on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 11:11:35 AM AEST
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*ponders* i'll hold my tongue to the question. interesting write, had me thinking... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: What Was That Thing?
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:06:01 PM AEST
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| Good write, easy flow of words and understandable.. thanks for reading my poetry. You read my poem My bedroom is haunted I wonder if I gone through what you husband had.. of course nothing went into my body but I say it grabs me and makes my body tingle all over and it frightens me. sandy |
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Re: What Was That Thing?
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 11:26:26 AM AEST
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| Inoc, this was very interesting. It has me wondering myself. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: What Was That Thing?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 11:35:10 PM AEST
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| There is kind of a state where this sort of thing happens. I had it happen once where I woke and couldn't speak or move temporarily. It's wierd. Anyway, there were a couple mispelled words, but overall interesting. Cheers! |
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