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11:11
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
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Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 05:50:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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11:11 and once again I’m off to bed
I’m going to rest my weary head
Thinking is tonight finally my time to go?
When my heartbeat tends to go too slow
It drops right down abnormally I’m told
You’d think I was really old !
Or could it be when I fail to breathe
Is it then that I’ll go with ease?
Though with this I wake every time
It must be something within the mind
When asleep I keep putting arms above my head
And my low blood pressure makes them dead
My arms they end up going all numb
Lack of blood, now is this the one?
It feels real strange, motionless and cold
And have to wait for blood again to get a hold
When its only one that has gone dead
And I reach with the other above my head
Lifting this “thing”, all cold without feeling
Knowing it's attached, but wait, it's healing
Funniest is, when it occurs in both arms
Wriggling around, and trying not to harm
I’m not afraid of death when all is said
When in my heart, I’m already dead
This is a nightly occurrence almost now for me
But I guess at best, when I go…. peaceful I’ll be
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
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2004-10-07 05:50:04]
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Re: 11:11
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:00:32 AM AEST
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Hmmm...methinks you need to buy some new clocks....
This is very strange indeed.....
((((((((((hugs))))))))))
Jen |
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Re: 11:11
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by inoc on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 07:06:37 AM AEST
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a nice write Mick
but *why 11 past 11 I wonder?*
anyway....yes...
I hate it when that happens with your arms....I get that same feeling alot.
yes it is comfortable with both arms above the head to sleep.....and
I hope your heart finds happiness....
cheers!~ |
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Re: 11:11
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by Kie on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 08:20:29 AM AEST
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Nights are hard sometimes especially when you can't find sleep and you can't get comfortable.
May you rest better in the future and hopefully before 11:11.
Kie |
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Re: 11:11
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 08:27:05 AM AEST
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Now I know why my hands fall asleep under the pillow at night. I have LBP, too. You must be about my same age. Thanks for a write that made me smile and think that we are all in the same boat.
Stitch |
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Re: 11:11
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by sandy_poetrygodslove on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 08:29:00 AM AEST
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| Good write mick. A thought that comes to me as well. having sleep apnea. take care. |
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Re: 11:11
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by Dorian on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 09:28:52 AM AEST
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sory for your pain, may a brighter day shine 4 you
Dorian : ) |
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Re: 11:11
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by pixie on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 10:45:32 AM AEST
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hehe a great write Mick, different but very good, thanks for sharing,
pixie xx |
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Re: 11:11
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 04:01:03 PM AEST
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| Hmmmm,strange indeedy. I hope everything's ok Mick. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: 11:11
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by Ronald on
Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 03:38:07 AM AEST
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| This is a nice one :-) Enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: 11:11
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by a_bear on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 04:36:04 PM AEST
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| Well you might be ready to go..but wait..what about this site..who'll take care of us??? Selfish I know to think of myself. Darn. I get numbness too..mostly from the neck up though...:-*) |
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Re: 11:11
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by afterdark on
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| Very solid post. |
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Re: 11:11
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 03:43:04 PM AEST
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very well written mick, i think to be human we will think of these things, but hmm.... i do hope your feeling better, and happy new year to you and kiddlings:) big hugs n' love nessa
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Re: 11:11
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by emystar on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 04:07:24 AM AEST
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Oh me, been missing out on all the best writes. isn't that jus like me?
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
i see u made it and so did i. |
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Re: 11:11
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 01:50:42 AM AEST
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I like this write..
Worry wort you are..
I understand.. at any rate..
Sometimes I pray to go to my Heavenly Father now
I like how you rhyme, and make it all clear.
Great writer... that you are..
RLPoetess ; )) |
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Re: 11:11
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by nic11 on
Sunday, 5th April 2009 @ 07:12:57 AM AEST
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OMG!! could not believe it when i saw you'd written a poem called 11:11!!! i see that time all the time! used to think it was bad luck but now me and my friends make a wish everytime we see it!!
-nicole |
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