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Friendship is Forever, right???
Contributed by
nightrider
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Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 12:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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if friendship is forever,
then has the world's end come?
if laughter lasts a lifetime,
then is my life now done?
if hope is the heart's anchor,
then mine must be lost at sea.
we talked of future things,
of things yet to come,
we dreamed of little things,
like the rising of the sun,
and as we walked together,
done that path called life,
we walked side by side,
and hand in hand,
then, our path split into two,
one made for me, one for you.
and as this treasured bond does break,
i pray that one day our paths will again cross,
and as you go something else you take,
you take my heart at my great cost,
for in you i thought i had a friend,
but to you, guess that wasnt true,
you leave me a broken heart to mend,
so, fair person this is all that i have to say to you.
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nightrider
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2002-11-14 00:30:00]
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Re: Friendship is Forever, right???
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 12:39:00 AM AEST
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| great write of feelings, true freindship never dies, she might just need some space |
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Re: Friendship is Forever, right???
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 01:34:05 AM AEST
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| I can really relate to this... I'm going through something of the same right now with my "best friend"... good luck |
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Re: Friendship is Forever, right???
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 02:36:05 AM AEST
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| she might be confused as to who she is,maybe someone lead her down a wrong path,if you show her your still a faithful friend she will come back to you! Christina |
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Re: Friendship is Forever, right???
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 02:44:12 AM AEST
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| this is so touching. great poem. loved it. write more! |
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Re: Friendship is Forever, right???
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 06:58:29 AM AEST
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| Lovely poem ..... nice words. I hope you work things out. |
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Re: Friendship is Forever, right???
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by OreO on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 07:45:24 AM AEST
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This is so sad , this hit home
with me alot because of the way
i feel about "friends". I really enjoyed
this one, Thanks for sharing it
very beautifully written
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: Friendship is Forever, right???
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by frozensuicide on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 09:58:41 AM AEST
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| Curse her! i hate that, people shouldnt do that. they shouldnt leave their friends! its not right! thats a good poem buddy. now i shall go read the rest! who - ha - ha - ha!!!!! O_o |
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Re: Friendship is Forever, right???
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by Ronald on
Tuesday, 19th November 2002 @ 09:18:05 AM AEST
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| Sorry to hear that your friend treated you that way. Anyway, good poem! :-) |
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Re: Friendship is Forever, right???
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by Gin on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 09:10:32 PM AEST
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| This is one of the best poems that I have ever read...I think that you should give this poem to that friend of yours...let her know how you feel...If she still turns away at least you let off your chest how you feel. |
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