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Elixir
Contributed by
Tanmaya
on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 02:09:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I’m listening
when you think everyone’s gone,
I’m listening
to the silent music of your heart.
Times and seasons rush by
in the space of a moment,
just hold your breath and
you’ll hear a lifetime in it.
A million miles lie between
us, a million lands to pass,
a million days and nights…
in the breadth of one footstep.
Dreams may pass, visions fade,
but love cuts deep- a mark
that cannot grow faint, and
love heals deep- elixir of life.
Let the dawns keep their secrets,
all I need to know is that
you’re near, and if I only reach
my hand, I’ll touch you tonight.
Coz I’m listening
when you think everyone’s gone,
I’m listening
to the dreaming songs of your heart.
Copyright ©
Tanmaya
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2004-10-07 02:09:51]
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Re: Elixir
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 02:57:32 AM AEST
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Beautiful! Such a piece of romantic poetry as this warms the heart of any reader. Thank you.
Andrew
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Re: Elixir
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by Archie on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 03:57:12 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem. It feels almost like you are speaking to the reader. This is very encouraging. |
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Re: Elixir
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 04:28:24 AM AEST
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| That's one of the most beautiful things I've read tonight. |
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Re: Elixir
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 05:53:10 AM AEST
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I like what this has to say, and I like the way you presented it.
You have much talent! |
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Re: Elixir
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 07:44:25 AM AEST
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| Wonderful poem, full of passion...........Mike |
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Re: Elixir
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 04:10:02 PM AEST
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this is sooo beautiful, a refreshingly romantic poem, such gentle quality, truely its a joy to read you:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Elixir
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 02:13:47 PM AEST
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Very, very, well written. It consumed my heart as I read it. Breathtaking. My favorite lines were:
but love cuts deep- a mark
that cannot grow faint, and
love heals deep- elixir of life.
Awesome.
Take care
David |
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