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No way out
Contributed by
jishes_4_ever
on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:03:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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She looks into the light
But doesn't see anything
Only darkness
She can't see the people
Standing right in front of her
She's damaged beyond repair
Thinking she shoudln't be
Thinking there's no place for her here
She's seen so many things go wrong
And had so many things go wrong in her life
She's so confused
Wondering why she's here
She's lost in the darkness
No light to be found
She tries to run
But she can't find her way out
So she runs faster
Hoping it will help
But it doesn't
She's stuck in this horrible place
With no way out
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jishes_4_ever
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2004-10-06 22:03:38]
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Re: No way out
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by Catalina on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:28:33 PM AEST
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Man have i felt that way for the most part of my life, but there are better times to be had...
This poem is excellent, thanks for sharing |
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Re: No way out
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:50:27 PM AEST
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| i liked this one, even if it isnt one of your better poems in your opinion. |
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Re: No way out
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 11:01:57 AM AEST
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Good write!
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