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''BOOM''!

Contributed by Love_letters on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 10:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

You came to me as if it were a dream.
You made it clear that I was the one you wanted! And, that no one would have to know.
You crept behind the the bed and in the shadow of the darkness you pulled out a gun; "BOOM!"

I fell to the ground. The last words I heard you say was: "If it were possible, I would love you and never show you to the world. But you denied me the one thing I ever wanted. Now, you must pay... in death!"

After that it is just a blur. I had a lapse in time from when it happened until now. The doctors tell me I have been in a coma for two months. They thought I would never wake up.

I remember feeling like I was dying...
I remember feeling like I was floating on air, seeing snapshots of my life, and images of people and events in my life of things that could only be described as my future if I hadn't "died". Everything seemed to be so real. But it was as if I was missing out on something.

Now, that I'm awake and alive I am trying to put back the pieces of my life. The cops came to my hospital room tonight asking me questions about "Lara" (the shooter). I told them she was my girlfriend at one time. I loved her with all my heart, and would do anything for her. But we broke up for a variety of reasons and she became obsessed. The calls, the visits, idle threats until that one day it all ended with a "BOOM"!

Lara was later convicted for attempted murder and sent to "Sweet Serinities" mental institution for a minium of three years or until the proper treatment has been given.

I lay here thankful for my life, depressed over love lost, and be strong for each coming day!

Copyright © Love_letters ... [ 2002-11-13 22:30:00]
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Re: ''BOOM''! (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 01:41:41 AM AEST
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Ohh thank goodness this isn't true!

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