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Finally
Contributed by
moon_light
on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 08:30:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Finally you return to me.
the best of friends,
family.
I missed you since that
dreaded day.
It is so hard to keep my
tears at bay.
Red spring roses
tulips, too.
these things remind me of you.
Whan I pass your old place,
tears cross my face.
You were my protecter,
like a brother.
There's nothing I can't do,
as long as I have you.
When you're gone you
hold a spot in my heart.
our friendship will never part.
Copyright ©
moon_light
... [
2004-10-06 20:30:16]
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Re: Finally
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 08:33:07 PM AEST
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| It's a good poem... Just check your spelling next time. |
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Re: Finally
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 08:46:10 PM AEST
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| Good write. Like Aline said check your spelling hehe. |
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Re: Finally
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by hellsfallenangel on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:27:18 PM AEST
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hey jen nice one real good read my latest one i put up well g2g bye
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Re: Finally
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by Kie on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 09:50:17 AM AEST
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Oh Gosh I can sooooooooooo relate to this.
I feel like crying or listening to melancholy music during a rainy day.
Packed with emotion. Loved it.
Kie |
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Re: Finally
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by Dorian on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 03:04:29 PM AEST
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u spoke from your heart and i heard it . . .
Dorian : )
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Re: Finally
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by thumper on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 06:34:21 AM AEST
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Moon, loved this one! You write so sweetly, and it touches people. :o) I even think I know who this one is about, maybe, maybe not. Keep writing and I'll be your no.1 fan!! ;o)
Luv Ya!
Thumps ; 0) |
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