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The Image of You
Contributed by
Merry
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Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 06:00:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Trusting the image of you to be more than a fantasy
Bristling against my cheek in the night
Fearful I would wake without you
Left to dance alone in the narrow streets
Pretending to smile at the bright lights
Feeling the image of you next to me
Understanding everything said and unsaid
Eyes watch my every movement, silently caressing
My hands falter at the first touch
Wanting to stay in that moment forever
Giving the image of me the way I am
See me in all my frightening glory
Spinning half out of control
The dance comes to an end and we must speak
Tasting each word like cotton candy melting in our mouths
Living the image that once was a dream
Breaking in a tidal wave over our heads
We hold our breaths and pray we survive
Something we never thought we would find
Has come to us begging to be lived
Copyright ©
Merry
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2004-10-06 18:00:21]
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Re: The Image of You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 06:05:50 PM AEST
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| so much love, I like this, very much. |
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Re: The Image of You
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 07:21:12 PM AEST
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That......is poetry at its finest. I watched in my mind as this took place ..I felt what you felt ..tasted the cotton candy words ( loved that line). You are the best at this Gaille.
Roses for my daisy :o)
Larry |
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Re: The Image of You
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 09:11:48 PM AEST
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| Great write. |
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Re: The Image of You
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:27:54 AM AEST
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Woah! You just get better and better. Always watching for your writes. Hoping to get yours and Larry's books soon. The images in this are so powerful and real. VERY NICE STUFF.
Stitch |
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