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Before you go
Contributed by
Archie
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Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 05:28:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I heard you were leaving
I know you are hurt
people aren't always as kind as they should
Trust me i know that
I was gonna leave
but I would be taking good examples with me
So I swallowed my pride
and thought hard what to do
It suddenly appeared to me
how i love you
and what you mean to me
Pride held my heart in it's terrible grip
taking my heart on a dangerous trip
through the woods of dispair
and the mounts of lost dreams
I lost what was important to me
I let bad feelings steal my greatest joy
the friendship that I had with you
but now I remember
just how much i need you
People have motives we can't comprehend
some are for real and some are pretend
when we let the bad actions tear at our hearts
the better part of us departs
replaced with a doppleganger
that rips at our souls
stealing all our hope and our joy
don't let him do it
keep love in your heart my friend
I'll hope you do it
please just do the same for me.
Just swallow your pride
and you'll know what to do
healing times will come to you
and you'll remember
maybe that you need me too.
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-10-06 17:28:39]
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Re: Before you go
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 05:32:14 PM AEST
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Archie, these words ring with such truth. I hope others will think when reading this and read the message in it and store it in their hearts. We all need each other.
Rita |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 06:04:07 PM AEST
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| you've hit it dead on. somthing to think about, well done. |
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Re: Before you go
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by Dorian on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 06:11:19 PM AEST
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| a verry nice writting archie u realy covered a lot of grond with this one . . . Dorian |
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Re: Before you go
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by inoc on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 06:50:10 AM AEST
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a meaningful poem
indeed well written
thanks for writing those words
cheers!~ |
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Re: Before you go
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by Kie on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 09:58:59 AM AEST
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Tender and from the heart. It had so much truth in it that I couldn't help but be touched by reading your poem.
Kie |
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Re: Before you go
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 02:49:09 PM AEST
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Life is to short for grievances Archie. Your words are so true.
A friend in need as the saying goes.
Be there for each other one and all
Splendid poem
love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: Before you go
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by theMoth on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 03:27:53 PM AEST
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Archie,
You are the man.
With each poem my
respect for you
is greatly reenforced.
I'm proud to be a fan.
--Mothy |
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Re: Before you go
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 12:58:57 PM AEST
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Awesome, Archie! Inspiring words!
And there is so much truth in them.
This was wonderful to read.
Thanks.
~Breezy |
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Re: Before you go
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by emystar on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:09:31 PM AEST
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Good work.
don't really know who or what this is about but certainly hope whoever listens. It's really sad when someone leaves the site.
Awesome writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Before you go
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by arden on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 07:51:13 PM AEST
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whoa, this was great.
well i for one am very glad that you didnt leave. this was a really good deep write.
awesome stuff arch.
well done.
Arden |
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