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Exfoliate my love.
Contributed by
sweettalkingwoman
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Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 04:58:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Exfoliate my love for you,
Strip me layer for layer,
Exaggerate your care for me,
When your friends are there,
I need someone to love me,
Not just to hold my hand,
A man who makes promises
Not wrote in windswept sand.
Copyright ©
sweettalkingwoman
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2004-10-06 16:58:15]
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Re: Exfoliate my love.
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by Dorian on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 06:29:34 PM AEST
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splendid little peace of writting, good luck in your quest
Dorian : ) |
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Re: Exfoliate my love.
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 07:23:10 PM AEST
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"A man who makes promises" .... ?
Perhaps one capable of keeping them would be preferred ? Just a thought.
A good write, that does speak in volume.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Exfoliate my love.
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by afterdark on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 02:31:40 PM AEST
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| I liked this one alot..You have talent.. |
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Re: Exfoliate my love.
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 03:48:55 PM AEST
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You are so very talented, and I loved that last line
Mason |
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