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What You Don't See
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 07:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Broken and scattered were the pieces of my heart,
It’s beating rhythm halted, it’s was torn all apart.
Wounded to the core my soul began to weep,
And I prayed for endless silence within eternal sleep.
But patiently you pulled me from this darkness that’s within,
And showed me life’s not over, your spirit entered in.
With love you did not know you gave, my hope slowly returned,
And dried up all the tears of doubt because you were concerned.
I am the one who caused me pain, though I laid it at your feet,
Still you took it all in graceful style, so gentle and discreet.
You helped me realize the truth I should have seen before,
And in friendship gave me what I need to open a new door.
In awe I am of all you do and the choices that you make,
Like a precious jewel seldom seen, impossible to fake.
So let me share what you don’t see, this truth I will impart,
You are the most amazing friend and always in my heart.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: What You Don't See
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by spaceotter on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 07:51:21 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem Doug. |
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Re: What You Don't See
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 09:18:36 PM AEST
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| Such a lovely poem ... beautiful words. |
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Re: What You Don't See
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 04:41:37 AM AEST
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| great write Doug, goes straight to ones heart, glad your back |
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Re: What You Don't See
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by OreO on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 05:52:55 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful and heartfelt
This really touched me, you truly
have a way with words, Thanks
for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: What You Don't See
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by juliette on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 03:53:44 PM AEST
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Sometimes???????? *smile*
Your words brought a smile to my face after a long, miserable day......
I can never do that - write a poem that isn't completely heart breaking in tone. I am challenged to do so now.
Good write! Thanks for sharing!
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Re: What You Don't See
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 08:33:51 PM AEST
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| a really great poem - you convey such depth of emotion without being over the top. keep writing xxx |
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Re: What You Don't See
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 04:51:40 AM AEST
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| Such perfect flow and rythm!! And with such emotion,,,Great write! |
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Re: What You Don't See
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 09:59:18 PM AEST
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| Aww that was just beautiful and very full of emotion. It also was very sweet. |
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