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Heart Shaped Teardrops
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 12:40:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Heart shaped teardrops fall from my eyes,
As the rain falls from the vast skies,
They fall straight into my soul,
My emotions are beyond my control.
Love causes a stir inside me,
I feel just like a buzzing bumblebee,
My head is somewhere in the clouds,
I feel secure wrapped in your love shroud.
This feeling is one that I can not describe,
It is one in which I have climbed inside,
Forever I will stay locked in rapture,
You are a fever I wish to capture.
My tears fall onto my smiling lips,
As I feel myself slowly slip,
Under a spell that you have cleverly weaved,
If I didn’t know you I’d have never believed.
That true love really did exist in you,
Your love is sweeter than honeydew.
You create all my happiness & my smiles,
For you I would walk over so many miles.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-10-06 12:40:11]
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Re: Heart Shaped Teardrops
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by chocolate_girl on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 12:57:44 PM AEST
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| aww ures is even cuter than mine!!! hehe ur an ace writer pixie. so i appreciate the comment 2 me!! thanx n yeah xx |
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Re: Heart Shaped Teardrops
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 02:12:48 PM AEST
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The title drew my eye and the poem was magnificient!
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Re: Heart Shaped Teardrops
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 02:27:51 PM AEST
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I love the whole concept of teardrops shaped like a heart. How very original and alluring.
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Re: Heart Shaped Teardrops
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by Dorian on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 03:02:08 PM AEST
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that was lovely pixie, just took me away 2 another
place and time . . . Dorian : ) |
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