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Scars
Contributed by
hollie85
on
Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Quickly,
I look at my wrists,
no blood now, no cuts now.
Body shaking all over,
from the visions; past.
If I build up enough hate,
I could revisit the blood.
Blood, how much will I bleed.
The rush, the slice, I wish,
let my blood flow, again...
Copyright ©
hollie85
... [
2002-11-13 19:00:00]
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Re: Scars
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by LJ on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 03:15:52 AM AEST
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| Ah I know that feeling. But I just celebrated a marker and you can too. I one years time I only cut once! Praise the Lord. You can overcome. Nice write. |
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Re: Scars
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by alternachik29 on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 08:52:39 AM AEST
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Hey, just wanted to let you know that ive been where youve been and i know what its like. and you can overcome anything, i did.
Alternachik29
Dictated by Scottie-to-Hottie |
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Re: Scars
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by crucifixioncross on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 10:10:31 AM AEST
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| i been there too but im not gonna say everyone gets through it cause i didnt really but either way i dont really like to see people doing it...i know i do it myself but its just sometimes i get so upset and i just want to die and i go the knife and build my anger and tears and cut and cut and cut but noone comes to see why im screaming in pain over and over again its just so hard to live this ***** up life and knowing theres aothers like you is sort of a comfort so thanks for the write although the meaing was much more important than the words |
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Re: Scars
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by Dark_Angel_BabAy on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 01:29:41 PM AEST
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| Your poem is beautiful, I know how you feel, I have been there many times myself, good luck hun. |
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Re: Scars
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 05:54:21 AM AEST
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again, extremely powerful.
quitting cutting is one of the most hardest things!
it's so much easier to gie into it, but then people start judging you because they don't under stand you or cutting at all! ... am i right? well, that's what it's like for me any way! |
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