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My mind
Contributed by
thelmerichs
on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 01:04:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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One day I will love you
And the next I can't stand you
Because I hate the fact
Someone has your heart
And its not me
Love is my playground
I guess i'm not a kid anymore?
I've grown up to find nothing
But hurt, pain, and fear
And even though I still blame you
I put the blame on me
If that makes sense
If you can grasp this
Then you'll finally get me
Finally get whats going through my heart and mind
I love you
I hate you
All at the same time
Over and over again
Copyright ©
thelmerichs
... [
2004-10-06 01:04:11]
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Re: My mind
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by blackeyedfriends on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 01:42:03 AM AEST
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| Word man. I may not have loved it as a poem, but I can defintely relate to what your saying. And even though I don't love it, that's just my style talking. Really, it's pretty cool. |
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Re: My mind
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 04:16:49 AM AEST
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Been there, no what ya feeling and it sucks, the way love can totally pull you down.
Cool poem, like the way it explained hoew you felt, awesome to read. |
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Re: My mind
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 07:49:27 AM AEST
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I know the feeling well ,,,,that feeling makes your insides stir...
a well written poem with power
cheers!~ |
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