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Teardrops
Contributed by
hoist1atca
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Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 11:36:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A tear is but a mixture of emotions expressed-
For the heart feels many things which it must convey-
And through this tiny pendant of a liquid gem-
The tenderness of the human soul is revealed…
Deep inside where feelings dwell hidden-
A teardrop forms and finds its way to the eye-
Someone says that we should not cry-
Yet the things we know are true must find flight…
The conduit for all that the heart knows-
Is found in the sparkle of this tiny fluid pearl-
Flowing slowly down the cheek and to the ground-
Like rain that drops from the sky in a summer shower…
Pain is the tear shed for the hearts burden-
A tear shed in laughter is for the happiness of life-
Joy is a tear shed when the soul finds its smile-
Passion is the tear shed for the heart that has found love…
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Re: Teardrops
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by Soulless on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 11:49:42 PM AEST
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what a beautiful poem of how tears are expressed. I loved the concept of this poem. Wonderfully written!
kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Teardrops
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by Buggsy on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 11:56:39 PM AEST
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I agree with Soulless wonderfully written, beautiful poem.
'A tear is but a mixture of emotions expressed'
Great line and it is so true, there are so many emotions contained within a mear tear drop. |
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Re: Teardrops
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by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 03:13:21 AM AEST
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This is tender, poignant and exquisite.
Never thought about tears this way--i specially liked the last stanza.
Full of emotion and depth. |
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Re: Teardrops
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 06:09:43 AM AEST
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| A wonderfully cool poem, explaining the tears meaning and painting crystal clear images, such a lovely write. |
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