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LOST SOUL
Contributed by
ll
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Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 11:02:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I lead you to my empty walls
To see all that’s hidden
But in return
You took my soul you took it all
I’ve never thought
You can make me so torn up in misery
But I’m strong, stronger than you know
And I’ve learned to let you go
For eternity with no doubts
Whether I will see a another day or not
Is up to you
But I will still survive the games you play
All my dreams and hope I once had
Is blown into the wind
Life is full of endless mysteries
The little girl you used to see
Is just a distant memory
You stepped on without knowing
But you let me go and now I’m free
On my way to a different place
But I can’t, you left me hanging
Without my soul
Till the end of this betrayal
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ll
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2004-10-05 23:02:41]
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Re: LOST SOUL
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by hoist1atca on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 11:42:14 PM AEST
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I like the poem-
The soul is the key to love and often it is taken away without arning.
sometimes "Love Is An Illusion" |
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Re: LOST SOUL
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by livefastdiefun89 on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 12:09:14 AM AEST
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| this makes me sad, but its great! |
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Re: LOST SOUL
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 06:12:02 AM AEST
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| Awesome write, dark and vivid, showing love in one of its many forms, I enjoyed reading, thank you for sharing. |
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