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away and gone
Contributed by
monophobic
on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:23:47 PM in AEST
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oops
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away and gone
take off out of here
without turning back
without sad eyes
and for sure without a sad heart
away and gone
leaving all that was
to be just a part of history
a moment that's now gone
away and gone
to the unknown
because location is just a petty worry
and a place on a map
i wanna be where nobody knows me
where they can't judge by stories they've heard
away and gone
with nowhere to really turn
ill pretend life is just a phase
and is gonna end soon
then heaven
the place i may have to turn because
only god loves me soo unbelievably unconditionally
away and gone
forever....gone
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monophobic
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2004-10-05 22:23:47]
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Re: away and gone
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:29:14 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. youre not alone in thinking that. =] |
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Re: away and gone
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by Soulless on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 12:04:34 AM AEST
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I completely connected to this poem. I have felt that all the time.
Although I never made it into a poem. Im glad you have to remind me of that feeling.
Wonderful Write!
Kisses,
Soulless |
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Re: away and gone
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by livefastdiefun89 on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 12:04:45 AM AEST
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nice
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Re: away and gone
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 06:16:12 AM AEST
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| A cool poem, such a flowing write, each word holding its own meaning, well done. |
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