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Divorced At Last
Contributed by
chrissylee
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Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:23:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Its been a long struggle,
Though finally the end has come,
we had some good times,
Followed by heaps of rain.
You crossed the last barrier,
When you started to lie,
Telling me there was no other,
Thats when I started bidding you goodbye.
In the beginning you captured my heart,
I remember the time,
You stopped at a bakery,
I asked if you wanted some of my cream bun,
You said yes and instead of just handing it to you,
I creamed you in the face.
We had some good times,
In the very beginning,
Times wore on,
I gave to you a son,
Even though before hand you denied you wanted one.
Once we were married things started to change,
You started to control me,
I had no gains,
You took advantage of me,
Every which way,
I paid all the bills,
There was no sharing anything,
It was left all up to me.
Well now today it has finally become official,
Today in court are marraige is now,
Void and null,
One more month and i have the papers in my hand,
I'll do what ever i want from here on end,
Hooray for this day free at last,
Free to be me and never be lied to again.
Copyright ©
chrissylee
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2004-10-05 22:23:36]
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Re: Divorced At Last
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:31:32 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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Re: Divorced At Last
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 06:18:47 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written poem, so much happiness sown into each word, I hope you oneday find someone to love who returns the same a hundred fold. |
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Re: Divorced At Last
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by Ronald on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:20:21 AM AEST
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Great poem I must say! Thanks for sharing.
-Ronald |
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Re: Divorced At Last
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 07:57:45 AM AEST
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how wonderfully happy and wrote by such a strong willed person. this is a true inspiration. thank you so much for sharing.
peace be with you
Gen x |
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Re: Divorced At Last
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 05:41:28 AM AEST
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Another masterpeice.
I know this feeling all too well.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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