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Somthing That May be Applicable to Life
Contributed by
kyletycz
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Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 09:55:56 PM in AEST
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Life sparks against the grain
Days go by to come again
The sun rises every morning
To give into the nights mourning
Taking life one day at a time
Results in wisdom sublime
To enojy the best of the bad
Is a gift from heaven my lad
To look into the dark and see the light
Helps in one's daily life
To conquer the temptation
And strive for contemplation
Are things that help someone
To stay in the warmth of the sun
And not get lost on the moon
Where there is an abundance of gloom
So live your life to the fullest
Grow yourself a mullet
Its time to find the good in the bad
And make life alot less sad
Copyright ©
kyletycz
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2004-10-05 21:55:56]
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Re: Somthing That May be Applicable to Life
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 09:59:36 PM AEST
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| excellent write. very true. =] |
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Re: Somthing That May be Applicable to Life
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by blackeyedfriends on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 02:04:18 AM AEST
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| I like the message, but not the diction and style. rating= 6.0 out of 10 |
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