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The End
Contributed by
the_fallen
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Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 08:36:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I see the darkness, it’s coming to me
I try to run but it holds me back
I hear voices in my head
Voices weeping about their pain
I cover my ears but I still heard them
I feel I cold grip around my ankles
I look and see them
I try to move but I can’t
I hear footsteps in the distance
As it came close, fear grew
I see a man and he comes up to my shoulder
And whispers in my ear,” Your end is near”
I feel a dagger pushing in my stomach
I scream in pain and fall down on the ground
Then more of them come out of the ground and pulled me down
It gets hotter as I go down and I see the hells fire
Is this what he meant when the end was near?
Was this really the end or is it just a dream?
I close my eyes and said,” This really is the end for me.”
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Re: The End
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by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 08:38:54 PM AEST
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Interesting and unique, I like it.
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Re: The End
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by kyletycz on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:04:45 PM AEST
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i like this poem alot, its very unique and quite interesting
l8r
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Re: The End
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:12:26 PM AEST
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lol. this write reminds me of the ones that i end with something along the lines of this is the end of me. i must have about 9 lives =]
this was an excellent write. i always thought it was funny how hell should be colder to hotter, but its the other way around, ::shrugs:: i guess thats a bad thing in this... |
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