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Help me
Contributed by
Se1f-Destruct
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Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:00:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The person that i seem to be
is'nt really who i am
who you see is fake
cuzz i cover all i can.
So you don't really know me
or the ways i feel inside
and you don't understand me
cuzz theres so much that i hide.
You'll never know the pain i feel
the horrors deep within
all of my past memories
are eating thru my skin.
I can feel the madness growing
from old obsessions you call sins
and i've never let you see that
i've worn a mask instead.
Someone needs to know my problems
ARE MESSING UP MY HEAD.
I need some where to run to
a place to go and cry
but there is nowhere to run to
no place safe to hide.
There's too much on my mind
i need someone to understand
i need someone to confide in
when i'm scared, alone and sad...
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2004-10-05 18:00:07]
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Re: Help me
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:13:33 PM AEST
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brilliant write. quite amazing, emotional, powerful, and intriguing. nice rhyme and rhythym.
well i hope this poem got you the help you wanted in the end. if this is one of your first poems, than you have much talent, and i hope you use it well. =] |
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Re: Help me
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:16:13 PM AEST
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| wow very powerful and emotional stuff you wrote here. i like how you became more pronounced in your problems at the end and ended it with a touch of sadness, great job! keep on writing! |
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Re: Help me
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by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 08:17:51 PM AEST
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You're SO brave for telling your parents. Good luck with everything. Let me know if I can ever help you, I can relate to the feelings.
Katie |
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Re: Help me
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:21:09 PM AEST
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| o gud luck! it might seem hard 2 tell ur parents, i spent years working up the courage, but when i did it was worth it, as im sure it will be for you |
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Re: Help me
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 04:53:27 PM AEST
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That was very good
even if you did use 'cuzz' instead of because
5 out of 5
If you have the time, could you take a look at my poems, and tell me what you think |
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Re: Help me
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 24th October 2004 @ 02:59:08 PM AEST
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i know jut how you feel...
i've been in your shoes too often...! |
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