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My Immortal Romance
Contributed by
Spell_Weaver
on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 05:47:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Your voice is rich black velvet that melts my heart
Much like a candle married to a flame
And now I'm slicing my wrists to make it die
Red is the color of passion, which is leaving my veins
Beauty truly is a curse unto this world
As you are to me, my dear
But you are still my blessing in disguise
Oh, sweet lover, how blind you are!
To be nothing but a photograph of your past...
When will your heart belong to me again?
Or was it really ever mine?
So many questions, not enough answers
Too many lies, not enough truths...
Back and forth, up and down
It's tying my stomach up in knots
It seems that all you seek from me
Is pleasure which I can not give
I'm boring... not good enough... dull
There goes the last drops of red
I'm glad I could so well quench your thirst...
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2004-10-05 17:47:59]
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Re: My Immortal Romance
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:16:41 PM AEST
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| we have the power to control the people we let into our lives. shutting the door on them and their words is simple to do, but many dont for their own reasons. |
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Re: My Immortal Romance
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by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 06:19:43 PM AEST
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| ( i definitly agree with "essentialy9"!) but your work was very dark and full of imagery, i really hope to see more of your work , hopefully ones that strengthen you =) |
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