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Teen Angst At Its Finest
Contributed by
ALineAboveTheStepBeneath
on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 05:06:20 PM in AEST
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Sometimes I don't understand
Why I can't just let go
And let myself love you
Sometimes I wonder why I want to
And sometimes I don't understand
Why it's you I've always wanted so badly
Sometimes I wonder
Why you'd want to be with me
Sometimes I let myself fantasize
Close my eyes and imagine
What it would feel like, being with you
I can feel your hands on me
Restless, endlessly moving
Touching me, exploring me, undressing me
I can taste you
Your mouth on mine
Your quick tongue and its tender touches
I can hear your breathing
Rapid and rhythmic
Your chest rises and falls against mine
And when I realize
You're not really there
That I've lost myself yet again
In a passionate affair
That existed only in my mind
Disappointment consumes me
Yet at the same time
I'm relieved
Sometimes I don't understand
The things you make me feel
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Re: Teen Angst At Its Finest
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 05:50:16 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: Teen Angst At Its Finest
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 07:39:49 PM AEST
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| VERY good! Lotta emotion put into this one. *thumbs up* |
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Re: Teen Angst At Its Finest
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 07:43:25 PM AEST
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| Well I've got to say, that was almost errotic. haha jp. good write tho. lol. |
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