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I want to be your shewhore.
Contributed by
sweettalkingwoman
on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 04:07:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Thinking of you
Before me
Want you here
to explore me
Build me up
Take me down
Nasty things
Dirty minds
Explosions of lust
Burn into my mind
I want you
Will have you
Will take you
And make you
I will for you
I am yours
Completely
Get sweaty
be messy
Get vulgar
impure
and obscene.
Throw silence
to the wind
You make me
Scream out
Dirty words
love Me hard
and make me
Please ravage me
Disgusting
Perverted
So kinky
Please fill me
Seduce me
Oh please won't
You hurt me
Convert me
to hating
Just make me
Your slave
Please.
Copyright ©
sweettalkingwoman
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2004-10-05 16:07:30]
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Re: I want to be your shewhore.
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by Flipped_out on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 04:13:44 PM AEST
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Wow sweettalkingwoman you should change your name to filthytalkingwoman this is HOT!!! Filthy and dirty...I loved it...you are incredibly gifted and well word this write
excellent first post, although Im sure some will be offended..Im not as Im a dirt bag
TY for sharing....more please
Kelly x
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Re: I want to be your shewhore.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th October 2004 @ 03:56:01 AM AEST
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It seems more erotic than kinky. I found it leaped into an assumption of perversion too directly, with 'convert me to hating', and left me slightly cooler than I wished to be having finished a poem with such a title. Also, the 'please' at the end contradicts
"Will have you
Will take you"
I'm unsure of the Sub/Dom element here . . . fascinating though it is - it confuses me slightly, although the passionate words are prevalent and certainly image-inducive. But what do I know? lol.
Keep writing. |
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Re: I want to be your shewhore.
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 09:34:12 AM AEST
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Lol flip is right we should call you filthytalkingwoman.
Oh by the way good write even though alittle on the x rated side. |
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Re: I want to be your shewhore.
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by pixie on
Thursday, 28th October 2004 @ 11:39:30 AM AEST
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wow *fans herself* wonderful write, I love your style, good job my blokes coming round soon, your poem has reall got me in the mood for some hanky panky lol
pixie xx |
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Re: I want to be your shewhore.
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 03:46:47 PM AEST
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lol this is like a porno in words...great, seductive write
Mason |
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Re: I want to be your shewhore.
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by Bridget_theMidget_Powerz on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:51:48 PM AEST
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| what a great poem! You're an amazing poet! I have got to read more of your work!!! |
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