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WHITE ROSES
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 04:01:51 PM in AEST
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White roses labelled pure romance
Wrapped in a silken bow enchance
Yellow roses sparkle like molten gold
Pink roses sweet dreams to unfold
Words of love echo through the night
Vibrating on the silence sheer delight
Tears that fall dissolved in showers
Rose petals fall on a bed of flowers
Lost in a dream of total self bliss
Embraced in each others wings abyss
Passionate kisses aroma of perfume
Firelight dancing chasing the gloom
Take my words and weave them in song
Whispered words echo romance sing along
White roses scattered petals an illusion
Dreams.. or fate destined souls in fusion
Love Angelxxx
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sweetangeluk
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by valentine on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 04:13:41 PM AEST
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Finespun and fragile. Wrote with the most pale and muted elegance. Purity at it's best.
~*~ Valentine ~*~
. . .Rose. |
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 04:16:12 PM AEST
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| true love and passion eloquently expessed |
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 05:20:03 PM AEST
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| I loved the flow of your poem. It was elegant, soft and wondrous to read. |
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 08:21:10 PM AEST
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Being a lover of the rose...how could I help but fall in love with this incredibly beautiful write. So gentle and lovely......like the poetess who put it to pen.
Roses ( color of your choice) at your feet
Larry |
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 10:53:40 AM AEST
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a tender and sweet write,
pixie xx |
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 11:27:45 AM AEST
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A lovely soothing and uplifting quality to this piece.
I feel all calm now, lol.
Steve |
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by bernard on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 12:16:48 PM AEST
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| This is a lovely most delicate love poem. One of the best that I have read so far on this list. More in the same vene please. Hugs from bernard. |
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by Archie on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 02:52:25 PM AEST
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| That was very cool. You have the writer's touch for poetry. |
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by CrimsonTears on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 11:02:39 AM AEST
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That was soo beautiful....i absolutely loved it!!
awesome write!!
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:33:39 AM AEST
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| Wel written..I like this piece.. |
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by RhythmBndt on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 09:50:20 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem :) Thanx for your comment. |
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by FleurdeSang on
Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 05:33:48 PM AEST
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Ah, the beauty of love and purity! Such a precious and bittersweet melody your words evoked! Beautiful and flawless! You have much talent, ange douce! I thank you for weaving such a magnificent piece! I thoroughly enjoyed it. May this proclaimation of love be writ large across Heaven, and strike the heart's of many! Much love.
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 01:57:45 AM AEST
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Beautifull boquet u have discribed her3e.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:01:45 PM AEST
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A heavenly beautifull masterpeice.
A great picture u paint with words.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:42:03 AM AEST
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| It seems to me that it's kind of ambiguous...a wonderful write, to be sure!! |
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 05:07:43 PM AEST
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What a gentle feel 2 your writting, verry beautiful in deed . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 05:52:35 PM AEST
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truely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: WHITE ROSES
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by SimplyMe on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 02:56:40 PM AEST
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I too am a fan of the Rose. Especially the White one. "Beauty and Passion" (I think) Anywho. I loved this write. Very detailed. You have a way with details, i literally jump into my Monitor and find myself in these places. Wonderful job. Much love.
~Alucia~ |
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